Group Pitch/Audience Feedback

From our pitch we used the following: we kept the original concept of our film which was the idea but chose to narrow it down to the idea of our protagonist doing something simple such as shaving which is something we had planned to do from the start but only intended to show briefly. We also followed the idea of having hints that he is a lonely man who is looking for a lady throughout our opening. In conclusion we took the audience feedback on board and used some of their ideas in our opening.

GROUP PITCH
Theres a game 100 girls, 100 days to live. In our opening we planned to show that he just killed her and she's lying in the bath dead and you see the blood flowing down the drain and basically takes place in a bathroom with low key lighting and we see him at the sink looking in the mirror just like doing something casual not even paying attention the the girl such as just shaving with blood on his hands so he's just actually committed the crime and he's shaving so its like natural so yeah he has 86 days to live obv cause hes killed 14 girls already so obv he's got 86 more to go but i think the intro is about this girl he just killed in the bathroom. so music wise were gonna have something slow and seductive so its gonna be kinda romantic with a little twist on it so we're gonna make it sound kind of horrorish and that will be playing in the background.

Camera work - Its gonna sort of show a girl on the floor it might be a close up maybe and it might sort of zoom out, its kinda like breaking bad how it will sort of pan around the room and through a window it might reveal things about the man, hes like a psycho so you might see medication maybe stuff like that maybe a picture of a woman and that again might conform to a typical thriller leaving the audience with a lot of questions to ask.

Because it's a monologue he talks about how it's basically about the thoughts going through his head and the last line of it is that his eyes are getting darker after every murder he comits and we will end be zoom into his

We had the idea of perhaps showing a girl in the bath which our protagonist would have just murdered.

Feedback

Likes the idea of 'C' as the title which we later changed to simply 'HUNDRED'

Unless you take the bathroom as the idea of a flashback

Is 100 girls 100 days realistic, we suggested that the character would be a really attractive guy that get women.

Maybe you see him on a website, we

Say its an apartment, you could have maybe the dating website open or a voice message left by a woman on the phone saying "looking forward to seeing you tonight"

The last shot being possily
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